General Poetry posted April 30, 2023


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Bye Bye, So Long, Farewell

Good Riddance

by Debi Pick Marquette


Almost forgotten

~ Can almost look at cotton ~

And not feel rotten
 



Ode To Winter writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem in 5/7/5 format about winter.

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I fear that this may have been misunderstood. This poem is not about cotton. It is about snow. The cotton referral is just saying that I have been hating the looks of snow for so long that even the look of cotton reminds me of snow. Then I think I made it worse with the video because the songs name is "See you in September" and I used that for two different reasons. Because as I wrote in descriptions, I wrote Bye bye so long Farewell, (words to the song) and referring to Winter leaving us. However the song also sings, "See you in September". And my thoughts were that at time we actually can get snow in September. Sorry if that wasn't clear about that.
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