General Poetry posted April 9, 2023 Chapters:  ...6 7 -8- 9... 


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alliterations and ode
A chapter in the book An April Fool

Rain

by sunnilicious


The bright blue sky suddenly turns cloudy
Cotton clouds are wavelike and choppy
And the smell of rain approaching is uplifting
Somehow, the scent deepens to tickle the senses
As the sky slowly darkens gray
A drizzle paces itself into a downpour
The raindrops move in the direction of the wind
Unbridled rain holds no shape
No thunder, No lightning
An afternoon rainshower with no melody
But a constant pitter-patter of rain plays on
Most drearily:drumming on random umbrellas

 

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REFERENCES:
1) Interesting Facts, 6 Amazing Facts About Rain, #1 and #5 somehow utlized in my poem - https://www.interestingfacts.com/rain-facts/ZBkHR1L2HgAHJsJZ?liu=5a619b00e9b85914b82bd5ca80a829a8&utm_source=blog&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=1763572207
2) Poetry Dances, Ode Poem Example - https://www.poetrydances.com/ode.php
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