| General Fiction posted March 31, 2023 |
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A heart bleeds as a man proposes
Forbidden
by Mario PIERRE
Charlotte's face glows as Erick, down on one knee, holds out the ring. Her 'YES' is drowned in a clamour of unbridled joy. I try to bury myself behind the rows of family and friends gathered in the park.
I fell in love with her at fourteen but realised I didn't stand a chance, seeing the radiance on their faces as they gazed at each other.
Charlotte holds her ringed hand up, looking around the room, then finds me.
"Jordan, I definitely want you as my maid of honour!"
I nod, forcing a smile while my heart bleeds to death.
100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
Charlotte's face glows as Erick, down on one knee, holds out the ring. Her 'YES' is drowned in a clamour of unbridled joy. I try to bury myself behind the rows of family and friends gathered in the park.
I fell in love with her at fourteen but realised I didn't stand a chance, seeing the radiance on their faces as they gazed at each other.
Charlotte holds her ringed hand up, looking around the room, then finds me.
"Jordan, I definitely want you as my maid of honour!"
I nod, forcing a smile while my heart bleeds to death.
I fell in love with her at fourteen but realised I didn't stand a chance, seeing the radiance on their faces as they gazed at each other.
Charlotte holds her ringed hand up, looking around the room, then finds me.
"Jordan, I definitely want you as my maid of honour!"
I nod, forcing a smile while my heart bleeds to death.
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Writing Prompt Take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story in just 100 words. If so, this is your opportunity to shine. The story can be about any subject you wish, creative approaches are of course encouraged. All stories must have the following: Main Character, Setting, Conflict, Resolution. |
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