General Poetry posted March 22, 2023


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Virga

by Mintybee

Rain starts to shower,
evaporates, and leaves wisps - 
phantom ambitions



3 Line Poetry Contest contest entry


Virga is when precipitation starts to fall from a cloud, but it evaporates or sublimates before it reaches the ground, leaving wisps trailing below the cloud. I enjoy projecting emotions and human traits onto nature, so I gave Virga the trait of giving up mid-task. It seemed to fit.
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