General Poetry posted March 13, 2023 | Chapters: | ...112 113 -114- 115... |
5/7/5/6/8 Tanka
A chapter in the book Tanka Collection
Blue Sea Holly
by Gypsy Blue Rose
For Rules, Please Read My Author Notes
western winds take me
where ocean waves touch my feet ~ coming and going ~
as they please to entice
and bewilder my practical self |
Tanka (means short poetry) originated 1300 years ago in Japan's Imperial Court where lovers exchanged tanka after a night together. Tanka evokes vivid imagery and reflection for the reader. They are free verse without meter or rhyme. They follow a 5 lines pattern of 5/7/5/7/7 (31) syllables or LESS because English syllables are different than Japanese syllables. The goal, as with most Japanese poetry, is to write as succinctly as possible. Tanka transitions from the descriptive top two lines into the reflective bottom three lines, using metaphor, simile, or personification. Modern Tanka rules are not as strict. The subject matter can vary, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love. Tanka is usually written in the first-person narrator's point of view. === click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." --Atticus
The pictures: Sea Holly, is a species of flowering plant native to central and southeastern Europe and Central Asia.
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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." --Atticus
The pictures: Sea Holly, is a species of flowering plant native to central and southeastern Europe and Central Asia.
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