Spiritual Poetry posted March 6, 2023


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When puzzled, have faith

Puzzle Peace

by Jessica Wheeler

 
 

I had a thought today, simple was the  regard

A memory, in fact, one I could not discard

Of an evening  spent when we stayed by the water

And the rainy night puzzle I did with my daughter 

 
 

Caught her eye perusing a bookshelf in the den 

Of the cozy scenic cottage we vacationed in

Her eyes wide with excitement, she proudly shared her find

Complex this puzzle was,  on which she set her mind

 
 

The puzzle before us was challenging and vast

I watched her smile fade to disappointment fast 

Sorting through pieces, missing one, maybe two

Glancing at my girl, I wondered what she'd do

 
 

A roller coaster puzzle right when begun 

Determined is my child, so she proceeded on 

Saddened me to see her moments of  discourage 

And reminded me of a time when I was her age..

 
 

Faith strong then, I'd pray every morning and each night 

Calling God my “penpal,” journal letters I would write 

Unexpected troubles that no child should endure

Happened upon me, making my faith not so sure

 
 

Though puzzling at times my faith, it stayed through the years

Some of which brought miracles, some brought endless tears

Often I'd feel hopeless, even now  reminiscing 

  Faith restored as I compiled the pieces missing

 
 

I turned to my daughter, deeply concentrating 

Assured her ill be with her if ever debating 

And forward we would push, no matter the cost

Even when discouraged, or many pieces lost

 
 

Putting faith in God above our doubt, above it all

Trust in Him to see us through the big and the small 

 If something is missing, replace it with your faith 

And watch as your puzzle starts to form and take shape 

 
 

If courageous and kind, you'll always find peace,

And with faith in your heart, worry and fear will cease

Have trust in the process even in your mistakes 

For there's a bigger journey of each path we take  

 
 

Patient but persistent we re-approached our task

And we puzzled on confident we would soon bask

We moved around the pieces to see what would fit

And trusted in our faith that we would finish it 

 
 

The picture starts forming, almost looking complete

Two pieces still missing though, we checked by our feet

Then she had a thought, proud of it and of herself 

She ran back to where she started, at the bookshelf

 
 

It was there that she found what we'd been looking for 

What wasn't In front of us, by our feet or on the floor

But back where she began, where the idea was new 

Puzzle with her Mommy was all she wanted to do

 
 

Together, we reached the end of our path  taken 

Free of any doubt, and our Faith unshaken

I'll think of this puzzle and the path to complete

Thanking God for these days, and Faith without retreat 











 



Faith Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem about your faith.


Sometimes, meaningful realizations come from the simplest of things. This puzzle, and its process, actually did inspire a much greater conversation between my daughter and me.
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