General Poetry posted February 28, 2023 Chapters:  ...21 22 -23- 24... 


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A Collom Lune

A chapter in the book Heart Crafted Poems - 2023

Night Lights

by JLR

 
Moonlight shines brightly.
Watch for Nightingale’s eyes gazing
Moons silvery light.
 
Catching sun rays
Dancing on the Moon’s surface
 Night lights beam.

 




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This is a Collom Lune contest. A Collom Lune is different from a Kelly Lune. There isn't a syllable count like the Kelly Lune. In a Collom Lune there are 3 words in
the 1st line, 5 words in 2nd line, 3 words in the 3rd line. Each line can stand alone as a complete thought, or the lines can run into each other in a continuation of a
sentence or phrase from one line of poetry to the next stanza.

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