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A Potlatch Club Entry - Triolet

A chapter in the book Heart Crafted Poems - 2023

Elixir of Life

by JLR

Ornate blooms burst above receding snow
as the wet elixir quenches their deep thirst.
While warm rays seize the day, the sun aglow,
ornate blooms burst above receding snow.
New growth is seen on tips of leaves below.
Gray skies splash rains yet from another cloudburst.
Ornate blooms burst above receding snow
as the wet elixir quenches their deep thirst.

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February
2023


A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines.

The 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat
and the 2nd and 8th lines repeat.
The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters represent the repeated lines.
Thanks for the use of Raindrops on the Fuchsia by Susan F. M. T. on FanArtReview.com
Club entry for the "~ TRIOLET ~ week of 2-18-2023 ~" event in "The Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
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Artwork by Susan F. M. T. at FanArtReview.com

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