General Poetry posted February 28, 2023


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Haiku (in black uniform)

by PoemsOfDD

 
in black uniform
silent army soldiers on
...small ants march in line
 



Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry

Recognized


Many reviewers wondered why there was no picture attached. I had a perfect picture lined up for this haiku but chose not to use it. The end satori line, and your imagination, speaks for itself.

I will add a picture when the reviewing period is over - for those eager to see what photo I would have attached during the time of being posted.

Thank you for reading my short poem.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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