General Poetry posted February 12, 2023


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Unrequited love. There are various ways it can end.

Thomas

by Barry Penfold

All night longThomas waited
As he had the night before
Looking upward to her window
Singing like some troubador

Hours of unrequited love and passion
Seemed a scant and poor reward
For a poor devoted Thomas
And the lady he adored

But then the door was opened,
Was this his darling pet?
A hand appeared, a bucket flashed
and he got sopping wet

A muttered oath,and a "Don't come back"
His coat was cold and cloggy
Then, with a cry, he leapt the gate
Chastened and very, very, soggy.



Love Poem Poetry Contest contest entry


Perhaps Thomas did not sing too well.
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