Family Poetry posted February 10, 2023


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a comment on relationships

The Moon and I

by Mintybee

Asking before asking, easing in,

because you don't know how I'll respond.

Crescent, full, new. Hesitant, blunt, silent.

Does it comfort you to know that the moon's still there,

despite it's changing phases?




ABC Poetry Contest contest entry

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Sometimes we need to talk about uncomfortable things with the people we love. But, if the relationship is a healthy one, it should stay strong despite how we feel in the moment. That's what this poem is about. The moon appears to change, and our feelings come and go, but the moon is still there, and hopefully the foundation of the relationship supports us despite rocky patches.
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