General Poetry posted January 28, 2023


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Piracy on the high seas

The Black Wind

by Aussie

They sit in caves by the sea
Sea calls to pirates endlessly
Endlessly the waves call to thee
Thee of evil ways, pirates shamelessly

Shamelessly boarding ships, marauders
Marauders capture wealth, champagne sips
Sips, drunks attack wealthy passengers
Passengers drowned; nothing left of wealthy ships

Ships Torn apart by pirate pranks
Pranks have gained gold and jewels
Jewels adorn pirate- fools- laughing
Laughing pirates soon to be fools

Fools will pay for all they drink
Drink and be merry before you think
Think of plunder, day of thunder
Thunder roars, fire, spit, sink!

Sink failed to see the enemy ship
Ship with huge firepower blast
Blast that Black Wind pirate hulk
Hulk slides under the waves so fast










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Loop Poetry Contest contest entry

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Contest Entry for a Loop Poem. Loop poetry is when the last word of a line becomes the first word of the next line. This is my signature style. It's more a challenge than rhyming - ABCB rhyming, tell me if I'm wrong, Just changed it to rhyme. Thanks to Gloria!
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