General Poetry posted January 28, 2023


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Complex Alliterisen/Decision

Redemption Reigns

by Susanjohn

 

Redemption Reigns


Desolate dirt and hopelessly hurt,
Luciferian lies fueling crippling cries.
Trenching truth of yesterday's youth,
disguised deceit and constricting conceit.
Plunder pride in steady stride,
secret sin and wickedness, where-in,
Man lives in a world devoid of God.

The promised place and glorious grace,
with goodness gaining and redemption reigning.
Sovereign shield and hopelessness healed,
prophets paving and salvation saving.
Perfect peace and sorrow's cease,
Forever faithful and grown grateful,
knowing Abba's love will lead us home.







 



Decisions contest entry


The Complex Alliterisen
(unrhymed)
Complex Alliterisen is a seven line per verse poem. But, the pattern for the first six lines must be
such that, when the number of syllables in the first 6 lines are arranged, the odd
number lines have syllables in decreasing order, and the even number lines, have
syllables in decreasing order. And, there must be two alliterations per line.
There are numerous syllable-count formats. Let's use the popular version below.

1st line- 9 syllables
2nd line- 11 syllables
3rd line- 8 syllables
4th line- 10 syllables
5th line- 7 syllables
6th line- 9 syllables
7th line- 9 syllables (same as line 1)

The odd number lines are as follows:
1st line- 9 syllables
3rd line- 8 syllables
5th line- 7 syllables
7th line- 9 syllables (same as line 1)

The even number lines are as follows:
2nd line- 11 syllables
4th line- 10 syllables
6th line- 9 syllables

See how they progress in decreasing order.
That's all; but don't forget two 7-line verses make a Complex Alliterisen.
The last line (the seventh line) doesn't need any alliteration in it,
but has to be the same number of syllables as the first line.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. Susanjohn All rights reserved.
Susanjohn has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.