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4/6/5/7/9 Modern Tanka

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Knee Deep in Dew

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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knee-deep in dew,
my bared skin soft and moist
like silk in the rain —
passion spreads across the floor
burnt in his memory ... forever
 
 
 
 
 




Tanka is one of the oldest types of Japanese poetry. It begun in the Emperial Court, where lovers exchanged a tanka after a night of lovemaking.

Tanka in Japan, is 31 syllables in a 5/7/5/7/7 form, but in English is 31 syllables OR LESS in a short/long/short/long/long format.

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