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Gogyohka Poem

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

On Dragon Wings

by Gypsy Blue Rose

On dragon wings   

dreams travel to faraway lands 

where a myriad of stars 

in winter skies 

dance in her eyes  

 

 




Myriad is a very great or indefinitely great number of persons or things.

GOGYOHKA is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllables count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. wikipediafor more info click here

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