Romance Poetry posted December 5, 2022


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1-6-1 contest entry

missed opportunity

by Mark D. R.

late
farewell kiss missed at gate ~
fate



1-6-1 poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 1-6-1 syllable poem. It has three lines. The first line has 1 syllable, the second one 6 syllables and the last line 1 syllable. The subject can be anything. However the three lines have to rhyme.


Hindsight is always 100%. A reviewer suggested that this was a 9-11 moment. Had I the benefit of that suggestion before I entered this 1-6-1 contest, the poem would have read:

late
to 9-11 gate -
fate
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