General Poetry posted December 2, 2022


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Speaking with time since your disappointed

Time Are We Friends?

by Daniel Fernandes

Time. are we friends?
Friends don't betray each other.
Other than that, you destroy who I love.
Love brings pain that doesn't recover.
 
Time what is wrong with you?
You see things diminish and just proceed?
Proceed without helping those who are damaged.
Damaged hearts can't manage grief!
 
Time what were you thinking?
Thinking of intervening in a good moment?
Moment in which I couldn't capture.
Capture that last hug again!
 
Time can you rewind at all?
All these thoughts make it hard to circumvent.
Circumvent the pain as well.
Well, Time I thought we were friends.
 

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