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Pair of Gogyohka poems for Japanese Poetry Club

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Unwavering Rock Reef

by Gypsy Blue Rose


If You Would Like To Join the Japanese Poetry Club, please check my author notes
 
 
 
white waves collide
'gainst unwavering rock reef
as my faith flutters
in winter's wind
'cause He's taken my love ... again

feeling all alone
with no one to hold my hand
crying like a motherless child
at His feet
warmly embraced by sunlight
 
 
 
 
 




GOGYOHKA is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllables count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but it never rhymes. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. wikipedia
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Thank you for reading my poem,

Gypsy Word Weaver

Club entry for the "KAKEKOTOBA POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
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