General Poetry posted November 28, 2022 Chapters:  ...73 74 -75- 76... 


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
4/7/5/7/8 Tanka

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

The Grim's Danse Macabre

by Gypsy Blue Rose


for Dean Kuch

 
 
my grief rages across the mire

to my beloved's grave

where I watch in disbelief

the Grim dancing with the dead

in a dismal black haze
 
 
 
 
 
 
 




-The Grim = is an omen of death, a shape-shifting black dog in the 17th-century.

-The Danse Macabre is a strange tradition from the Late Middle Ages. Artists depicted people dancing with decaying corpses and skeletons, to express their fascination with death.

GOGYOHKA is a five line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllables count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, metaphor are okay but never rhymes. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. wikipedia
for more info click here

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy Word Weaver
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. Gypsy Blue Rose All rights reserved. Registered copyright with FanStory.
Gypsy Blue Rose has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.