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Gogyohka for Japanese Poetry Club

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

He's Gone

by Gypsy Blue Rose


If You Would Like To Join the Japanese Poetry Club, please check my author notes
 
 
 
Out of control,
I cling on to my empty bed
and dread dawn
as another day is on its way —
I know it's over - still I grip
 
 
 
 
 




GOGYOHKA is a five line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllables count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. wikipedia
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Club entry for the "GOGYOHKA POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
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