General Poetry posted November 25, 2022


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Josh is a new man

An Instant Change

by Raul1

Josh was an insecure man
he takes a sip of a new coffee,
immediately he feels different,
a sense of confidence comes over him,
believes he can conquer the world.
 
No longer shy around girls 
they even enjoy his company 
all share laughs and jokes,
Josh even asks one for a date.
 
His depression has lifted,
Josh is filled with joy,
he sings and dances everywhere he goes,
everyone thinks he's crazy
but he doesn't care.
 
Now, Josh is secure with who he is,
attends college then medical school 
graduates with honors,
becomes a well known doctor.
 
Josh has cured many of his patients,
and earned many accolades from his peers.
Everyone trusts and looks up to him,
youngsters want to be like him.



The Drink Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem. You (or your character) take a sip of a drink and feel different. What happens?
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