General Poetry posted November 22, 2022


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Living in general is hard.

My Effort

by Daniel Fernandes

A pool of faith drowning the pride.
Touching hope, lies. 
Work but suffer.
Live to hug her.
 
Love is awake, mistaken time.
Paid it like wine.
Hug deception
Money is done.
 
Placed my effort into my life.
Work, home, kin, wife.
Time laugh again.
Don't assume friends.
 

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