General Poetry posted November 19, 2022


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In response to a dream

Sending flowers

by Wendy G

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Last night I had an awful dream

Part based on truth, so it would seem

My friend was in such dreadful pain

The pills she took were all in vain.

     . . . . . . . .  

To the doctor she tried to go

Her progress was so very slow

On her knees she slowly crept

And I could see how much she wept.

     . . . . . . . . 

I saw the pain on her dear face

Crawling she was, at such slow pace

I tried to help her to her feet. . .

Had to accept complete defeat.

     . . . . . . . .

“There’s nothing more that they can do,

But thank you for just being you!”

Then I knew that she would die. . .

But I’d not said my last good-bye!

     . . . . . . . .

I woke up with a horrid start,

Trying to slow my racing heart!

Now, first thing, I’m going to send

Flowers to this most precious friend.

     . . . . . . . .

These will cheer her last days on earth

And tell her of her special worth.

In my dream she was so downcast

But soon she’ll have no pain, at last.

     . . . . . . . .

I hope the gift will help her see

That she means so much to me.

My dream helped me to understand,

That death's a gift which He has planned.

 
 


Writing Prompt
Imagination is a fascination sometimes. This one herein is mine.

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She does not live close, and I do not see her often. Yet in my dream I was with her and trying to help her up, but not succeeding. She seemed, in my dream, to be crawling towards the doctor's room, on all fours, body wracked with pain. Fortunately, although in pain, she is not near death (I hope), but in dreams everything is twisted ....
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