General Poetry posted November 14, 2022


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Wonderful creatures

Deers

by Raul1

A deer efficiently runs away
it's led astray
For it, I will pray
I don't think that they grow grey
 
Deers are beautiful creatures
please take a look at their features
I hope they don't suffer seizures
 
It reminds me of the movie, Bambi,
I would rather see a deer than a zombie
They are pretty fast
A human won't outlast
 
A beautiful forest they live in
I saw a deer deep within
Some hunters hunt them for fun
I think that they should never use a gun
 
Deers are friendly
but they aren't calmly
because they scare easy
touching them isn't breezy
 
 
 
 



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