Romance Poetry posted November 11, 2022


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It is difficult to move on after a heart shattering break up

Entanglement

by HarryT

 
She was a girl entangled by a past love wire
Shivering, so frightened and so very alone
I said I’m ready to help you face the unknown
Never hurting you by being a selfish liar  
 
You are so delicate and my heart’s desire
Your love I will cherish and never disown
She was a girl entangled by a past love wire
Shivering, so frightened and so very alone
 
You, dear one, set my hopeful soul on fire
You, my dear, will be my healing moonstone
Promise you our love will never be outgrown
I'll cut the wire, promise my love will soar higher
She was a girl entangled by a past love wire



Rondel Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
This poem is the similar to the rondeau poem. The first and second lines repeat in the middle of the poem and at the end. Although only the first line repeats at the end. The rhyme scheme is normally ABba abAB abbaA(B). More information and an example.
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