General Poetry posted November 9, 2022


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Just working with atmosphere here, thought about The Shining

Overlook

by Erik Rosales

Al Bowlly. Corridors. Wallpaper cranes. Tea lights. Wall lamps. Switches. Cinnamon. Tub scum. Chrome, chipped. Copper, green. Buried. Buried. Escape. Escape. Loudspeaker. Lounge. Ballroom. Snowblind. Savior. Scratch. Scrape. Shatter. Record ink. Boot drum. Plush carpet. Endless carpet. Drumming. Lurching. Calling. Endless.


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