General Poetry posted November 7, 2022


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watched a train passby today and this came from it.

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by Erik Rosales

He waits

he waits 

and watches the train

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His toes are numb in his sneakers

holes in his sneakers

holes in his jeans

holes in his sweater

holes in his billfold

beard patches

burn scars

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He waits 

and watches the train



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