Romance Poetry posted October 30, 2022 Chapters:  ...52 53 -54- 55... 


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3/7/5/7/8 Tanka for the Japanese Poetry Club

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Dusk Deepens

by Gypsy Blue Rose


For Rules, Please Read My Author Notes

 

Dusk deepens 

with vixen’s cries for her mate,   

as my tears free fall  

on lily-scented pillow 

musing about one-sided love

 

 




-- When a female fox (or 'vixen') calls for her mate (or dog) sounds like a woman crying.
-- Vixen = a female fox; an attractive woman
-- Artwork by Chie Yoshii click here if you want to see more

TANKA is a Japanese poetic form that originated in Japan's Imperial Court, where the men and women engaged in courtship would exchange tanka after an intimate night. This poetic form was created 1,200 years ago. FORM: It's written in a succinct manner of 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS because Japanese and English syllables are different. Personification, metaphor, and simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes.
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click here if you want to see tanka rules
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click here if you want to see modern tanka examples
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click here if you want to read free online tanka book
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click here to read Tanka Society of America
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click here to read Masterpiece Classes
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

Club entry for the "ROMANTIC TANKA POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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