General Poetry posted September 25, 2022


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Your journey and ours

Dear sun

by Wendy G

 

you head home to rest 
 
with smooth slide past horizon - 
 
darkness here, light there
 
 



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry

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My photo, taken from a moving car.
I was watching the sun slowly set, and thinking that our loss and darkness here becomes gain and light on the other side of the world.
But this also speaks of our life journey, and the sunset of our life.
Those left behind experience the darkness of grief, those who go to heaven experience light and life.
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