War and History Poetry posted September 2, 2022


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
A veteran's perspective.

Broken

by Douglas Goff

Pulling at me, my anguish tears
Angry and alone, nobody cares

In my thoughts I am so lost
Nobody understands the dreadful cost
Fully aware of my mental rage
Unable to advance my life's sorrowful page
Lurid memories of war, the cruelest of cage



Acrostic Poetry Contest contest entry

Recognized


Not all war wounds are visible. Not all who survived, really survived. Although I am a veteran, I wrote this poem in honor of a family member who served in both Desert Storm and Desert Shield. The battlefields have faded away, but his mental scars have not.

These are the words that many vets use to describe their low points::
anguish
alone
lost
dreadful
rage
sorrowful
cruelest
(bold in the poem)

We sent them out and broke them. We have a responsibility to try and fix them.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. Douglas Goff All rights reserved.
Douglas Goff has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.