Writing Poetry posted August 30, 2022


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Emptiness

by HarryT

love
i've known
comes only
in wishful dreams
admit it's my fault
breaking her loving heart
no responsibility
wanting to live a carefree life
fun fades away, and emptiness comes
what could, what should have been, is gone for me



Etheree Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.
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