General Poetry posted August 26, 2022


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A rime couee for the Potlatch Club

Living in the Moment

by June Sargent



As stars come out in bright array

I celebrate the end of day

with biscuits and hot tea.

The stresses of the day I shed

before I curl onto my bed

with Ginger next to me.




I dream of floating to the moon


inside a glitzy red balloon.


Just leave it all behind.


But soon I hear the bluebirds sing


as earth begins awakening.


And coffee's on my mind.




While Ginger stretches by my side,


my eyes begin to open wide.


Reality sinks in.


Another dawn, another day,


I know not what may come my way.


Just let the fun begin.








Ginger would be the cat...

The rime couee is a French poetic form that uses six-line stanzas with a 3-part rhyme scheme and variable line lengths. Here are the guidelines:
Six-line stanzas.
Eight syllables in lines one, two, four, and five.
Six syllables in the third and sixth lines.
Rhyme scheme of AABCCB.

Club entry for the "~ Rime Couee ~ week of 8-25-2022 ~" event in "The Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by Jewell McChesney at FanArtReview.com

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