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Modern Tanka Suite
A chapter in the book Tanka Collection
Dreary Messenger
by Gypsy Blue Rose
For Rules, Please Read My Author Notes
dreary messenger cloaked in black plumes drenched in starless sky it brings unwelcome thoughts entangled in painful sharp shards
aggrieved inner child feels responsible for his sins, and undeserving of love, wed to man after man to get it right 'that one time'
the revelation brings tears to her aged eyes forgiving her child enveloped in His loving arms no longer entrapped
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MODERN TANKA is a Japanese poetic form. The form was created 1,200 years ago. It used to be written between lovers but now you can write about anything you want. Like haiku, it's written in a succinct manner in 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS. Personification, metaphor, and simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. click here if you want to see modern tanka examples -- click here if you want to read free online tanka book -- click here to read Tanka Society of America
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." --Atticus
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and 2 member cents. MODERN TANKA is a Japanese poetic form. The form was created 1,200 years ago. It used to be written between lovers but now you can write about anything you want. Like haiku, it's written in a succinct manner in 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS. Personification, metaphor, and simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. click here if you want to see modern tanka examples -- click here if you want to read free online tanka book -- click here to read Tanka Society of America
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." --Atticus
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