Humor Poetry posted August 15, 2022


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Dave is Still a Child

by Raul1

He never learns anything new,
Dave's always been a kid at heart,
he is in his thirties and
still isn't potty trained.

He buys kid toys
to play with,
yet people consider him a friend.

He drinks Kool-Aid
all the time,
his favorite show is
Pee Wee's Playhouse,
and he watches.

He's normal and 
not retarded,
he hates growing old,
acts is a kid.

His parents are embarrassed,
they're used to him,
he's their big baby.

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