General Poetry posted July 16, 2022 | Chapters: | ...92 93 -94- 95... |
Kake Kotoba Suite- 31 syllables or less in 5 lines
A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes
Left All Alone
by Gypsy Blue Rose
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Left All Alone |
Picture of the Maui Parrotbill bird
amber waves = volcano lava
The Maui parrotbill bird, is critically endangered, with less than 150 individuals left. Five of the seven rare bird species were killed in an epidemic of avian malaria brought by mosquitoes. A male bird was seen singing by itself on the slopes of the windward slopes of Haleakala volcano.
KAKE KOTOBA is a Japanese poetic form that uses poetic devices (personification, alliteration, metaphor, imagery, juxtaposition, etc ). FORM 31 SYLLABLES OR LESS IN FIVE LINES. The poetic devices are like hanging words building a bridge between two images. Better translated as: Pun, word play, words with a double meaning, very much like haiku or senryu but in five lines.kake kotoba wikipedia
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Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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amber waves = volcano lava
The Maui parrotbill bird, is critically endangered, with less than 150 individuals left. Five of the seven rare bird species were killed in an epidemic of avian malaria brought by mosquitoes. A male bird was seen singing by itself on the slopes of the windward slopes of Haleakala volcano.
KAKE KOTOBA is a Japanese poetic form that uses poetic devices (personification, alliteration, metaphor, imagery, juxtaposition, etc ). FORM 31 SYLLABLES OR LESS IN FIVE LINES. The poetic devices are like hanging words building a bridge between two images. Better translated as: Pun, word play, words with a double meaning, very much like haiku or senryu but in five lines.kake kotoba wikipedia
Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
*If you would like to join the Japanese Club, please click here and look for the Japanese club* RESERVE A SPOT /SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY
Club entry for the "KAKE KOTOBA POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB". Locate a writing club.
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