General Poetry posted June 21, 2022

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Trapped and crying out. Listen for others.

Last Words

by LanceHill

"Open up the door."
"I can't breathe in here."
Last Words that I heard.

5-5-5 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem that has three lines. Each line has five syllables.

We all need help and get trapped at times. Sometimes it's a physical location, sometimes it's our mind. Listen to those around you and be there when the cry comes out.

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