General Poetry posted June 10, 2022


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traditional senyru

senyru (angry teenager)

by Val Crisson

angry teenager
slaughters nineteen innocents
angels keep them safe



Write A Senryu writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
A senryu is a three line Japanese poem structurally similar to haiku. It is unrhymed and the subject is based human nature. Line 1 - 5 syllables - Line 2 - 7 syllables - Line 3 - 5 syllables. I


This is a traditional senyru, therefore no capitalization or punctuation. The title is in the traditional form, also. Babies killing babies has "brought me to my knees" - no picture on purpose.



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