General Fiction posted April 16, 2022 |
A Down Under Thrill
Surprise Visit
by Wils
Surprise! 80 Words or Less Contest Winner
“Surprise!”
I’ve been practicing how to do this for weeks. As each day gets closer, I am a mixture of nervousness and excitement. My parents, back in Australia, have no idea that I’m coming. I have not been home in six years, and I know they’ll be thrilled.
I give myself a pat down. Tickets, passport, money; all there as I wait for my taxi to the airport. A knock announces its arrival.
“Surprise!!”
My parents stand at the door!
“Surprise!”
I’ve been practicing how to do this for weeks. As each day gets closer, I am a mixture of nervousness and excitement. My parents, back in Australia, have no idea that I’m coming. I have not been home in six years, and I know they’ll be thrilled.
I give myself a pat down. Tickets, passport, money; all there as I wait for my taxi to the airport. A knock announces its arrival.
“Surprise!!”
My parents stand at the door!
I’ve been practicing how to do this for weeks. As each day gets closer, I am a mixture of nervousness and excitement. My parents, back in Australia, have no idea that I’m coming. I have not been home in six years, and I know they’ll be thrilled.
I give myself a pat down. Tickets, passport, money; all there as I wait for my taxi to the airport. A knock announces its arrival.
“Surprise!!”
My parents stand at the door!
This is my dream of what I hope to happen in a few months when I intend to surprise my family
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