Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted April 15, 2022


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Freedom

by Yardier

SHE WAS LYING IN THE SUN
HALFWAY DEAD
RAPED AND STRIPPED
       BY THE CARAVAN       
                                     
UP FROM EL SALVADOR
SEARCHING FOR A HOME
LEFT IN THE DESERT NAKED
BROKEN ALL ALONE   
 
SHE CROSSED MOUNTAINS
FREEDOM WAS HER GOAL
DETERMINED, SHE MADE HER WAY
THROUGH MEXICO
 
HER BODY FACED NORTH
SHE’D BEEN LEFT BEHIND
EVIL MEN HAD USED HER
THEY HAD A GOOD TIME
 
SHE CRAWLED AS FAR AS SHE COULD
WITH LITTLE HOPE SHE HAD
REACHING FOR FREEDOM
WITH HANDS FULL OF SAND 
 
FREEDOM IS JUST A BREATH AWAY
ON THE DESERT FLOOR
THE BORDER IS SO VERY CLOSE
SO IS HEAVEN'S DOOR
 
SHE FINALLY FOUND HER FREEDOM
IT WASN’T WHAT SHE PLANNED
SHE TOOK THE LORD’S DETOUR
INTO THE PROMISED LAND
 
FREEDOM COMES AT A COST
SOMEONE MUST DIE
IT COULD BE YOU, COULD BE ME
OR SOME OTHER GUY
 
THERE’S A TIME IN EVERYONES LIFE
WHERE STAYING IN PLACE
IS WORTH THE RISK AND DANGER
OF LEAVING IT
 
CONSIDER WHEN YOU TRAVEL
CONSIDER HOW FAR
CONSIDER CROSSING A DESERT
TO REACH UPON A STAR
 
CONSIDER CROSSING A DESERT
TO REACH UPON A STAR
SHINING ABOVE MOUNTAINS
THAT SHINES FROM AFAR
 
IT SHINES ACROSS MIGHTY SEAS
TO FAR OFF DISTANT LANDS
OFFERING LIBERTY AND FREEDOM
TO EVERY WOMAN AND MAN
 
UP FROM ANYWHERE ELSE
PEOPLE TRAVEL ON
TO DISTANT SHORES OF PROMISE
AND FREEDOM'S OPEN ARMS
 
         

 




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