Romance Poetry posted April 4, 2022 Chapters: -5- 7... 


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Pair of Tanka 3/6/5/6/7 = 27 ; 4/6/5/7/7 = 29

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Moonbeams Caress

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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As moonbeams
      caress your bare skin 
            my recollection 
            of last night reverberates
            over my mounds and valleys

How can I not touch 
      our yearning still in dreams
            pinned to rekindle 
            our relentless desire
            harbored in our starving hearts
 

 



 




Tanka syllable count is 31 syllables or less in a short/long/short/long/long

Painting by Ikenaga Yasunari

Reverberate = to excite or stir up: (Her singing reverberated through the house.)

TANKA is a romantic Japanese poetic form that originated in the Japanese Imperial Court, where men and women engaged in courtship would exchange tanka. The form was created 1,200 years ago. Like haiku, it's written in a succinct manner in 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS in a short/long/short/long/long format because Japanese and English syllables are different. Personification, metaphor, simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. click here if you want to see tanka rules -- click here if you want to see modern tanka examples -- click here if you want to read free online tanka book -- click here to read Tanka Society of America

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Gypsy

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