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3/7/5/7 /7 Romantic Tanka for the Japanese Poetry Club

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Mournful Loons

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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mournful loons 
      serenade me at twilight
      outside my window —
instead of my beloved 
      who rides my yearning afar

 



 




Few birds sound as mournful as the Common Loon at night

TANKA is a romantic Japanese poetic form that originated in the Japanese Imperial Court, where men and women engaged in courtship would exchange tanka. The form was created 1,200 years ago. Like haiku, it's written in a succinct manner in 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS in a short/long/short/long/long format because Japanese and English syllables are different. Personification, metaphor, simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. click here if you want to see tanka rules -- click here if you want to see modern tanka examples -- click here if you want to read free online tanka book -- click here to read Tanka Society of America

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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy


Club entry for the "ROMANTIC TANKA POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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