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Kaikai Poem for Japanese Club

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Her Red Hair Ablaze

by Gypsy Blue Rose


If You Would Like To Join the Japanese Poetry Club, please check my author notes


her red hair ablaze
sprinkled with cherry blossoms
as the sunset dips
in the blazing horizon 
where swans sing to dying dusk

 




HAIKAI is a Japanese comic poetry form, a linked form that developed into a more serious form in the 17th century under the influence of MATSUO BASHO. Eventually, it became HAIKU. The form is 5/7/5/7/7 stanza that can be repeated if you like.
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haikai rules and examples

*If you would like to join the Japanese Club, please click here and look for the Japanese club* RESERVE A SPOT /SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

Club entry for the "KAIKAI POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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