General Poetry posted March 16, 2022


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Lune contemporary Haiku 5-7-5 (spongy moss carpets)

a walk in the woods - see notes

by Mark D. R.

spongy moss carpets
the glade with muffled footfalls
and voices alike



5-7-5 Nature writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 poem on the topic of nature. Must follow the proper syllable count (five syllables for first line, 7 for second, 5 for third line).


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This poem combines the 5-7-5 Haiku syllable format with the Jack Collom Lune 3-5-3 words version.

Internet reference:

New York-based poet Robert Kelly first created the lune in the 1960s. The Kelly lune consists of three English syllables in the first line, five in the second, and three in the last. It was named after its shape, which resembles a crescent moon. Later, poet Jack Collom came up with the word-count-variant lune that is more popular today: three words in the first line, five in the second, three in the last.
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