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A Poem about Life.

A chapter in the book "The Gift of Life."

Bleeding Night!! (A)

by Ricky1024


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"Bleeding Night!!!!" (A)
Chapter Number One
(Accidentally Yours?)
Written on January 30th, 2022
By Doctor Ricky 1024
Copyright C.Fanstory
'All Rights Reserved'

'The Date?'
'Yes, I Hate!'
'Was March 31st, 2003.'
...
Night had arrived crying and Lightened Tears of woe.
Slowly came from below.
'I was home relaxing, after work, alone.'
'Yes, except with my wife.'
'Carolyn Ann Richmond Harbach Smrkovsky.'
'My Gift from Above.'
'Whom I so much Loved!'
...
'Now, most of the kids were at a birthday party on Liberty Avenue in Manahawkin, New Jersey.'
(The Ocean Acres section)
'Yes, for my older stepdaughter Nicole Megan Harbach.'
'And, she ordered a WWF Pay For View.'
(She loves wrestling!)
'Along with my other younger stepdaughter Kyle Erin Harbach.'
'My granddaughter Sasha Lynn, and my future son-in-law Fred Drum.'
'And lastly?'
'Yes, my beloved and Only Son Jason Richard.'
'And, last but not in the least.'
'My babygirl and youngest daughter Dana Alyse Smrkovsky.'
...
Note: 'And, the only missing piece to this puzzle?'
'Yes, was my oldest daughter Corrine Alexis Smrkovsky.'
'She was enjoying her first semester at Douglas college in East Brunswick, New Jersey.'
(Part of Rutgers University)
...
'Now, you have to realize.'
'I thoroughly enjoyed my time after work on my computer.'
(After a day as a Grocery manager for a bunch of jerks!)
'Yes, and so absorbed in a game of chess on chestnet.com.'
'And, my opponent?'
'To tell you the truth?'
...
'Yes, it's now been over Eighteen Years.'
'But because of what was happening and soon awaiting?'
'I can't even remember how well the game was going with Satan!'
'And, then Suddenly out of Nowhere!'
...
'That Damned Noise?'
I thought.
'I swear at that moment in time?'
'Hold on!'
'Becoise.'
'Let me phrase this correctly just right?'
'It was "Bleeding Night!"
'Now, after the First noise permeated my Saddened Soul?'
...
Note: 'This was the Ford Mustang Convertible.'
'Yes, hitting the curb first and then the telephone pole at over 100 mph!'
'The Second noise?'
'Yes, was even a little bit louder!'
'This was when the car.'
'Which was now at an estimated height of about 6 or 8 ft.'
'Came down to the street below, shattering the windshield, and trapping the young driver, Brian Cole, behind the steering wheel!'
'Yes, this Saddened my Soul and would soon take its Terrible Toll!'
...
'Now God, I know and I knew right away.'
'Yes, ever so Deep in my soon to be Broken of Heart.'
'Yes, that somebody was in desperate trouble!'
'Yes, crying out most likely!'
'Yes, and only a couple blocks away!'
'What I didn't know?'
'What I saw and held back and didn't want to say?'
'Was what was going to happen next!'
Ring! Ring! Ring!
...
'The call came in and woke up my only wife Carolyn, who was most likely dreaming of gambling in Atlantic City!'
'But now?'
'Yes, now she would be absorbed into this Fuc**** Nightmare with me!'
'Can't You see?'
'Spare the thought?
'Or was it Spare the Rod?'
'Exactly now whose job?'
'And, what have I now purchased and now bought?'
'Dear Lord God above?'
'Is this the Hell that You brought?'
...
'The call was from my younger stepdaughter Kyle Erin.'
'You had better get over here fast!'
'And, it's Jason!'
'He's been in a terrible accident!'
...
Note: 'When I heard her words?'
'I could taste the Fear from way over here!'
'And, I said and thought to myself.'
'I will need a Second Heart!'
'Because I knew now deep down in this Broken Heart of mine.'
'Yes, that these two horrible noises!'
'So undefined!'
'God, can You not see?'
'Yes, involves ME!'
...
'You know, It's funny how Faith and Fate.'
'Yes, together my date.'
'Again, another part I hate!'
'And, they both work well with Destiny?'
'And, "Time the Great Comforter"
'Just sits back and wonders why?'
...
'Why Dear Lord God?'
'Why Dear Lord God Above?'
'Why Dear Lord God Above is someone now needed to Die?'

****

"Bleeding Night!!" (B)
(Chapter Number Two)
"Praying with All of My Heart"
Written on January 31st, 2022
By Doctor Ricky 1024
Copyright © Fanstory
'All Rights Reserved'

The scene upon arrival.
'Of course Darkness had set in and it was likely raining.'
'There was an eerie silence!'
'The calm before the storm?'
I thought.
...
Note: 'The first person at the scene?'
'Yes, was Judy Kish.'
(A S.O.C.H. Meridian /Hackensack Nurse)
'She was attending to my son until our car pulled up.'
(The accident had happened on her property)
'She then quickly went in her house.'
'As if a scared little mouse?'
...
Note: 'An investigator from Ocean County Violent Crime Scenes was marking the curbing.'
'And, the Wooded Behemoth Monster?'
'Yes, stood above communicating telephone pole to telephone pole!'
(In my own mind)
...
(This I didn't understand at the time)
'Nor did I understand why this woman Judy Kish.'
'Who was trying to assist.'
'Then decided when we had pulled up to go back in her house?'
'I didn't think at the time.'
'Yes, that's what nurses are supposed to do but at that moment of time?'
'I didn't think!'
...
Note: 'What you need to understand?'
'Yes, is Judy knows Jason, and Jason knows Judy, and her son Rocco.'
...
'This would be the beginning of a Quagmire that would have to be resolved or I would go FUC**** 'INSANE!'
I thought to myself.
'Now if this is a good place to pray?'
'I never would ever find a better!'
'Dear Lord God Above.'
'Please send down all Your Love?'
...
'Innocently enough?'
'I truly believed, truly that my Son.
Jason Richard.'
'Whom was a Very, Large, Young, Man.'
'Yes, was just unconscious?'
'And, just laying against the driver.
Sleeping and just unconscious?'
'While Brian Cole?'
Yes, who is now complaining!'
'Get me out of here!'
'Call my mother on your cell phone!'
...
'God, Is this Act Number One?'
'Yes, in the movie Entitled,
"Nightmare on Nautilus Avenue!"
'What I would learn later was that these requests were highly unusual!'
'Even though Brian was trapped in the lying prone position!'
'Yes!'
...
'And, with the steering wheel!'
'Yes, of the Ford Mustang!'
'Yes, that at one time?'
'Yes, was professionally raced!'
'Yes, Atco New Jersey Raceway!'
'Yes, by an adult driver!'
'Yes, and now?'
...
'This child?'
'Whom was now complaining because he was now wedged and forced firmly!'
'In a lying prone position!'
'With the steering wheel against his chest!'
'And, at best?'
...
'His response and request?'
'What wouldn't make sense?'
'That later I would learn.'
'That he was dared to do exactly what he had just done!'
'Yes!'
''And, his wish?'
'To Die.'
...
"And, now I lay me down to sleep." "And, pray the Lord my soul to keep?"
"And, if I shall die before I wake?"
"I pray the Lord my Soul to take."
...
'But now not the worst moment of my existence!'
'His insistence that he not only wants to live?'
'Yes, but he wants me to become his Lord and Savior?'
'But I would tell you this there was a greater force working that day!'
...
'So, I did as he requested and called the number that he insisted.'
'God forbid because he continued and persisted!'
'Yes, this coward of Only Seventeen!'
'But what about your friend who's lying next to you?'
'Yes, I thought to myself.'
...
'What about my son Jason who's now in a deep coma Brian?'
'With fluid now pronounced and emoting?'
'Now coming out of his right ear?'
'But I understand that in a coma even though unconscious the victim can still hear?'
'But now and with the beginning signs of trauma?'
'Yes, that he has been "Raccooned!"
'Yes, as if beaten up in a prize fight!'

****

'If I could just die?'
'Yes Lord take me instead?'
'After all it is me now who is dead!'
'But it was about this time that things started to happen quickly?'
'Yes, including at first the arrival of Kim Cole his mother.'
'Welcome to your son's nightmare!'
(I thought to myself)
'Yes, because he caused all this!'
'Later on I would learn that this child was on an adult antidepressant called Effexor!'
...
Note: 'And, on the police report.'
'Yes, which wouldn't even be produced!'
'Yes, until almost two months later?
'Yes, on Mother's Day!'
'Yes, that it would be virtually littered with lies!'
...
'As for now though?'
'Yes, more police officers would arrive.:
'But this time from our local Stafford Township Police Department.'
Along with the fire company, curious local residents, who had heard the noise also.'
...
'This is when they decided first to work on Jason.'
'One fireman covered him because the convertible top was dislodged.'
'Why?'
'Because of my son's head and the result of the accident!'
'While the other firemen draped him in some kind of material.'
'The second one would smash his window when his ax!'
'Yes, and then they together.'
'Yes, would pull my only 18-year-old son Jason.'
'Out finally from that Death Hearse!'
'And, carefully load Jay on a gurney.'
Now?'
...
'Yes, I was getting scared that he wasn't waking up!'
'Dear God above!'
So, I screamed at one word!
'JASON!!!!'
No response?
...
'And at that very moment of time?'
'Yes, at 8:30 that night.'
'Yes, and on March 31st, 2003.'
'Yes, and for me?'
'I Died!
...
'As the rain silently continued to fall.'
'Yes, and I thought.'
'Jason will be all right?'

****

"Bleeding Night!!" (C)
(Chapter Number Three)
"Off to See the Wizard!"
Written on February 1st, 2022
By Doctor Ricky 1024
Copyright C.Fanstory
'All Rights Reserved'

'Time stood motionless now.'
'Yes, as my wife, myself, and Jason's girlfriend Angel.'
'Now were rapidly heading South on the New Jersey Garden State Parkway.'
...
Note: 'They had previously airlifted the two boys.'
(That's after loading Jason in the ambulance first)
'Then followed by Brian Cole who had to be extracted yes.'
'And, with "The Jaws of Life!"
...
Note: 'I was told after arriving at the Atlantic City Trauma Hospital.
Atlantic City, New Jersey.'
'That unfortunately, Jason had had a Heart Attack on the way but they brought him back.'
'An Eighteen-year-old having a Heart Attack?'
'Yes, whom was Extremely healthy previously?'
'That does not make any sense but it will in the End!'
March 31st, 2003. 9:45 p.m.
...
'When we first met with intake, they asked if we had any insurance and I replied...
'Unfortunately my employer from C&A Enterprises.
(Anthony and Charles DeFiglio)
'Unfortunately, had decided to save a little money.'
'He took away my family coverage.'
(After many years)
'And, then offered me single coverage.'
'Yes, saving him about $1,800 a year.'
'I refused.'
...
Note: 'This will have nothing to do with it up and coming medical treatments of my son Jason."
'Next?'
'We were taken into a room by a woman in charge of imagery and X-rays.'
'Three sides of the room had black and white pictures.'
'I estimate now from memory.
Yes, about thirty.'
'And, all pictures of my son Jason's brain!'
'Insane!'
...
'Then the woman said to me and Carolyn.'
'I'm sorry to tell you this, and I don't mean to but this is probably the worst I've seen.'
'And, I know this now is very mean.'
'Yes, in my 10-year career here at this hospital.'
'In Atlantic City, New Jersey.'
...
'And, at this point?
'Yes, I had my second Heart-Attack and died the second time!'
'We next road the elevator up to the Second floor to the Trauma unit and to our son's room.'
...
Note: "Warning!"
Note: "Graphic!"
'The first thing you need to understand is the severity of the injuries.'
'Yes, and based on the impact of a telephone pole?'
'And, a Human Being's body shaken.
'Yes, as if "Shaken Baby Syndrome" But instead of a baby?'
'Yes, of only a few pounds?'
'Now a young man of over 250 lbs.'
'And, unfortunately, shaken by a Being that's about 20 feet tall!'
...
'We noticed that Jason was now hooked up to machines.'
(Yes, of course)
'And, he also was being treated with medications to reduce the brain swelling.'
'His head had swelling...
'And, his eyes had closed...
'And, were now swollen...
'And, also along with being black and blue bruised.'
"Raccooned"
'This is as if he was beaten up in Fifthteen Round prize fight.'
...
'There were other things also now happening rapidly!'
'And, we were told to and introduced to his Brain-Oxygen Monitor.'
'The nurse told us that normal brain oxygen level was****
'And, if it goes to zero?
'The patient is considered,
"Brain Dead"
...
'I thought to myself.'
'Now is there any other good news that my family needs to hear?'
'Yes, in this Nightmare no longer on Nautilus Avenue!'
'Now on Pacific Avenue in Atlantic City, New Jersey.'
...
"Bleeding Night!!" (D)
(Chapter Number Four)
"Heaven's Waiting for An Angel?"
...
'And, now Mister Rod Sterling?'
'Yes, there comes a point in one's life when the decision needs to be made.'
'And, this decision, no matter how hard it may seem, needs to be!'
...
'There's a Fifth Dimension beyond that which is known to man.'
'It is a dimension as vast as space and as timeless as Infinity.'
'It is the middle ground between light and Shadow, between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of Man's fears and the summit of his knowledge.'
...
'This is the dimension of IMAGINATION.
'It is an area which we call,
"The Twilight Zone"
...
'Dear Lord God why is this happening to me?'
'It's been over Seventeen hours now and it's a new day.'
'I feel like I'm imprisoned in some kind of chamber.'
'There's a concert drip that never ceases.'
'My mind is in a constant spiral!
And, I'm so damn dizzy I want to throw up!'
...
'A couple hours ago?;
'Yes, we were asked by the head nurse to leave the room.'
'She said they had called a surgeon and he wanted to come in and do a procedure.'
'I would later find out that they would actually tap into Jason's skull just enough to try to relieve the building pressure.'
'To no avail.'
'A few hours later?'
'Yes, Jason would have a reaction to the thousands of dollars of anti-swelling medication.'
'And, that they would have to give him another injection?'
...
'I must have been in that room and added that room a dozen times in tears!
'At this point the blood oxygen monitor for Jason's brain was at zero.
'I remember Brian Cole's mother's husband.'
'Yes, coming into the hospital.'
(When I was when I had left the room)
'He asked if I was Mr. Smrkovsky.
'And, I said yes.'
'He then put his arms around me and said that Jason was going to be all right.'
'But he didn't know what me my wife and my children were learning quickly.'
...
'Kim Cole was in and out of the two rooms.'
'And, she would go to the foot of the bed and pray for Jason.'
'The next day of course Brian was released.'
'Yes, because he just had a little blood in his urine.'
'And, he was seen out in front of his house playing basketball!?'
'This infuriated Ron Thorn.'
(Another kid on the block that Jason grew up with)
...
'This was the Seventeen-year-old that took the 5.7 CC. logo off the ground from the Ford Mustang.'
'Yes, and then tacked it up on the telephone pole about 10 ft.'
'There was many things written on that pole.'
'There were flowers below, growing.'
'And, there were candles.:
'And, we used to hold a vigil there once a year on the 31st of March.'
...
Note: 'I burned a picture of Jesus Christ in a 8x10 piece of wood.'
'I then stained and polyurethane it.'
'With a picture of Jesus crying and his tears were the color Blue.'
'That was also high up on the pole.'
'Now over Eighteen years Later?'
'Nothing remains but memories.'
...
'Yes, we donated Jason's many organs because people needed him more than we did anymore.'
'It's funny how Fate can step in and how Heavenly Father notices all.'
...
Note: 'Three weeks after the accident.'
'I received the first of three letters from Chaz.'
'To then be followed with three more letters from a man named Bill.'
'Both these people received Jason's gifts.'
'Chaz?'
Yes, Jason's Heart and lungs!'
'And, Bill who that front page of the Asbury Park Press stated that he had died!'
'Yes!
'Jason's right kidney!'
...
'Both these men are doing well, along with an unknown and now grown female.'
(From South Jersey)
'Yes, who has never responded to me but is now my fifth daughter!'
...
'But is there actually a Fifth Dimension?'
'You have your choice?'
'Yes, you can ask Rod Sterling.'
'Those three lucky individuals who have gotten a second chance.'
"The Gift of Life"
'Heavenly Father above.'
'Or you can just pray?'
'What more now can I say?'
...
'To learn more about,
'Organ-Tissue Donations?'
'Simply contact my dearest friend.'
'Lara S. Moretti the L.S.W. with
"The Gift of Life!"
'Philadelphia, Pennsylvania at
1-800-DONORS-1.'
...
Jason Richard Smrkovsky.
November 5th, 1984~
March 31st, 2003.
Note: 'Organ's Graciously donated on April 1st, 2003.'
(April Fool's Day)
"And, the Beat Goes On"

Approximate Word Count: 2,932.




Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ.
Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
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'Doctor Ricky 1024'
And, his Incredible Picture Entitled, "Just Little Jay"
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