General Poetry posted December 2, 2021


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Imayo Japanese Poem

The Last Season

by Gypsy Blue Rose


He adored his femme fatale, 
in high leather boots, 
miniskirt, and pushup bra. 
But she never felt 
completely cherished and loved
and as sunrises 
went by, her beauty fell flat 
in her last season

 



 





IMAYO POEM is a Japanese poetic form created in the 12th century. It consists of 4 lines with a 12 syllables count and a pause between the first 7 syllables and the final 5. An alternative form is 8 lines with a 7/5 form.
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8 LINES 7/5
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