Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 13, 2021 Chapters:  ...14 15 -16- 17... 


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The moment between worlds...

A chapter in the book Apocalypse

Apocalypse pt. 16

by estory

After the end, where will we go?
What will become of us?

Will we lie here forever,
unmoving, waiting, remembering
who we used to be?

Or will everything just go black
as if it had never been?

A void as empty as the space between galaxies
a never ending silence
an unbroken absence

Or will there be light at the end of the tunnel?
Will we hear a voice
feel a hand
see a face

Like a raindrop on a windowpane
brightens for a moment
in the sweep of the headlights

Then vanishes,
never to be seen again?

Will it be like someone sitting in a darkened room
listening for sounds of life next door?

Suspended animation?

An unremembered dream?





In this part I wanted to try and capture what we might feel in that moment when this world will pass, before the new world becomes apparent, using images of unsettling surroundings and trying to dig up those emotions. I wanted something of a free fall effect, when we have our hands stretched out and feel nothing, when we can see nothing and can only imagine what is or might be out there. A moment when we just have to leave our senses and reason behind and just trust God. estory
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