General Poetry posted October 23, 2021


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The Waiting

by Carlos' girl

Alone is not so bad you say
no one to love but you're okay
they left for the suburbs
married and kids
your grandma said every
pot has a lid.

You buy recipe books and
make a home
spending all your weekends alone
you know you shouldn't but
still you wait
just killing the hours hoping on fate

Then one day he catches your eye
the morning train, that cute guy
you fall in beside him it feels great
you're elated now and you can't wait

Each of us likes to be a pair
knowing someone else is there
to simply ask "How was your day?"
"I'm walking home; you going my way?"

That feeling of bliss there's
a person for you
it turns out he was waiting too



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