General Flash Fiction posted October 10, 2021


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a 50-word story

You Cant Live Too Long

by RodG


“It’s hard to believe you’re a hundred years old today, Mary.  Six weeks ago you were hospitalized, but now you’re strong. Your color’s great.”

“I’ve lived too long, Doctor.”

“Don’t say that.  Each day hereafter is a bonus.”

You’ll outlive me, he thought.

A stroke took his life hours later. 




50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a story that is a dribble. That's 50 words. Title not included in count.

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I know an apostrophe is missing in the title. FS processor will not let me insert it.
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