General Flash Fiction posted October 10, 2021 |
a 50-word story
You Cant Live Too Long
by RodG
“It’s hard to believe you’re a hundred years old today, Mary. Six weeks ago you were hospitalized, but now you’re strong. Your color’s great.”
“I’ve lived too long, Doctor.”
“Don’t say that. Each day hereafter is a bonus.”
You’ll outlive me, he thought.
A stroke took his life hours later.
50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry
“It’s hard to believe you’re a hundred years old today, Mary. Six weeks ago you were hospitalized, but now you’re strong. Your color’s great.”
“I’ve lived too long, Doctor.”
“Don’t say that. Each day hereafter is a bonus.”
You’ll outlive me, he thought.
A stroke took his life hours later.
Writing Prompt Write a story that is a dribble. That's 50 words. Title not included in count. |
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