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A chapter in the book "The Gift of Life."

Knocking on Heaven's Door

by Ricky1024

"Knocking on Heaven's Door"
(Based on the song by Eric Clapton)
Written on October 9th, 2021
By Jason Richard Smrkovsky
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'I'm going back home and there's no stopping me!'
'There's something deep inside now happening Here?'
'And, what it is?'
'Isn't exactly yet clear?'
...
'Yes, I know I'm breathing, I can feel my Hearts beating.'
'And, soon I'm going to have that meeting!'
'I see the clouds clearing, Angels I'm hearing!'
'Everything else is going down.'
...
'Warmth greats me and my broken Soul?'
'Seems so discreet of me.'
'And, knows the toll.'
'I'm now shedding my Sins; stepping in.'
'Been waiting for this!'
"God's Sweet Kiss!"
'Seems FOR-E-VER?'
'Sufferings?'
'Never More!'
...
'Because I'm knocking on Heaven's Door!'
'Yes!'
'I'm going to the Promised Land!'
'Hand in Hand!'
'Going to meet the Man!'
'Understand?'
...
'I got to go and start myself a brand new *Band!'
'Cuz that's what I meant for!'
'And, between you and me I'm now?'
"Knocking on Heaven's **Door!"





*Band: noun
Note: My son Jason had started a band at age sixteen.
I bought on the drum set and he learned also to play keyboards.
As a percussionist he played in all the local high schools ceremonies.
He started cutting CDs and sold them for a dollar a piece.
"Jason's Hot Shit!"
...
About 4 years before the passing because of his car accident.
Finally figured out what the title of the band meant.
Which which was exactly what he did with his organs.
"Four Ways to Save"
...
*Door: noun
Entrance into your abode but in this case of course Heaven.
I picked this title because Eric Clapton lost his child.
Yes, and he knows in this song exactly what it feels like.
...
Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ.
Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
Fan Art Review, this Talented Artist,
'Linda Bickston'
And, her Incredible Picture Entitled,
"The Light of Heaven"
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by Linda Bickston at FanArtReview.com

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