General Poetry posted September 11, 2021


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putting on a show

dancing petals

by Bichon

the flowers dance
freely in the wind,
petals swirling
while stalks shimmer
like limbs

i watch them with joy,
wondering what
compels them
to put on such a show
for me

but as i gently reach out
to place a finger
on a softly velvet petal,
the dancing stops
and the only sound
remaining is the silence



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many of our flowers are dying now that the weather edges away from warm. it has been very unpredictable the past few days with a few storms. so this is just a free verse to say goodbye to those flowers, see ya next year!

i officially start my second year of college next year, and guess what? i will finally be in person for lectures! i cannot wait, even though i will get lost a bunch of times. it will be fun! my driving lessons are also going very well, i am halfway through them, woohoo! sending some positive vibes to all of you guys too.

photo is from google!
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